the sunset shades of red and orange
and the black of the city below
the tumult of the world
in hue
the needless bloodshed
the destruction of morals
the sense of
utter hopelessness
there is fighting for the freedoms
that the comfortable among us
thought were won a century ago
or half a century ago
or a decade ago.
so why is the sky still filled with red,
with anger
with vitriol?
it’s crying out in solidarity
with those
who currently battle for change
the sky says nothing more,
just stares down
at the torn-up town,
brow furrowed,
face red-hot
with rage
a lone, shadowed man stands at his window
as the birds caw and flee
from his rooftop.
through the glass,
he sees the red, the orange,
he sees the faintly tinted violet
peeking through,
and he sees the silver sliver of a moon
rising over it all
Photo by Mind Core
This was written in response to Photo Challenge #318 from MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie.
Also shared on earthweal’s open link weekend.
Beautiful!
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A well written thought for the times.
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A well written thought for the times.
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Beautiful
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Thanks, Era! โณ๏ธ
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Anytime ๐
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There’s a lot of despair here, but I also see hope in the sliver of the moon. I like the way you use nature to mirror human experience. (K)
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I’m glad you see the hope at the end. Thank you for your comment!
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Such a beautiful ekphrastic poem, Joy โ I didnโt need to see the actual image โ I closed my eyes and saw it in my head. I love the phrase โthe tumult of the world in hueโ, and the lines:
โthe sky says nothing,
just stares down
at the torn-up town,
brow furrowed,
face red-hot
with rageโ.
The switch in perspective, to the manโs view, is so well done.
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Thank you so much!
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This is a very thought provoking poem. You have asked some very important questions that need answering.
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I’m happy you liked it!
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That silver moon rising, serene above the tumult, in those fiery skies…..well done!
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Thank you!
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Thatโs really beautiful. The coming of the moon in the end is very powerful!
God bless you,
Sandra Jeanne
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Thank you, Sandra!
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This is beautiful.
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โค Thank you!
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Great post ๐น
Thank you for sharing
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Thanks so much!
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just gorgeous, thank you for writing this
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Thank you for your comment!
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Beautiful ๐ keep writing
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Thanks so much!
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Great poem! Love the lines, โthe sky says nothing/just states downโ. Thanks for posting!
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Thank you!
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Perhaps he sees a bit of hope.
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Yes, that’s the moon. Just a sliver, but very present.
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Lovely words! Thank you for sharing. Please check out the Inspirational Bloggers award on NeuroDevotion โ I have nominated you for the Award. ๐
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Wow! Thank you. I am flattered!
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Minneapolis – thank you
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Yes, absolutely! Thanks for your comment.
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Very beautiful!!
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Thank you!
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Awesome!
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Love this!
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A remarkable readโบ๏ธ
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What a beautiful and perfectly described poem! ๐ Thank you for penning it down.
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Thank you for your lovely comment!
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