I remember lying on Your bed, waiting for
You to come home from that walk that
You took because You needed
a break from my frustrating
inability to tell you what
I was feeling.
I did my best to muster up the courage to
say what had always been behind
my lips.
When You entered the room, I just
C R A C K E D.
Tears turned to rivers, rivers turned to oceans,
oceans threatened to drown me.
Because, even then, letting
it all spill out was not
cathartic.
My feelings were a porcupine quill, buried deep
under my skin. I tried to pull out the quill,
slowly, painfully. I made progress, but
I couldn’t get the quill out. I left a
third of it still down inside of
me, and now my skin was
inflamed and bloody
from the whole
ordeal.
I wanted to scream, but I didn’t. I wanted to
stop crying, but I didn’t. I wanted to
write these words out on Your
wall, but I didn’t.
Don’t You know that my thoughts are poems? That
they flow from me best with a pen and paper
or from a keyboard
or as a mural?
But of course You don’t because I’ve never opened
my mouth to say those words
to You.
I still keep my feelings underneath the surface. I’ve
always thought that it was just who I was. Until
You, I didn’t recognize that it is a flaw,
something that I need to let go of
in order to show trust and
vulnerability.
A relationship is a constant give and take, and I
need to give more of myself over for fairness’
sake and for my sake and more
importantly, for
Your sake.
I do promise that I’ll try harder next time,
but I know that it won’t be with You.
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I’m So, So Sorry
My biggest flaw

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I love this. And I can relate.
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I’m glad it resonated with you
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Self-isolating and bottling feelings… you captured it all so perfectly. I love the formatting of the lines so that they look like descending stairs, it compliments the atmosphere. Lovely piece ❤
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Thank you. This one was super cathartic to write when I did it over a year ago now.
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This so desperately sad, and so beautifully written. ❤
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Thank you
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