Rain tumbles,
all waterfalls
and slick streets.
The world may be wide and wild,
but right now it is wet,
drenched in an unpleasant thinness,
a coating on everything
that offers chill and slip.
The elements–
the wind whip,
the cold biting air,
the cloud drizzle–
are so uninviting.
So maybe today is a day to stay.
Maybe today is the day to stay.
oh, I really like this one, Joy.
❤
David
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Thanks, David!
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Thoroughly enjoyable read, Joy. Today will indeed (for me anyway) be a stay-day, after I return from my doctor visit, anyway. I’m hoping to post something then.
I’m especially (and favorably) impressed by your inclusion of the link to an earlier, related poem. I think it amplifies this piece very nicely. Well done. Thanks.
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Thank you!
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I liked the ending very much. So beautiful!
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❤️❤️❤️
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act right
not uptight
tense
sense
call me
say hey
old fuck
wuz up?
lmao~
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having a day like this right now ❤
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It’s been a rainy week here, too
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Dreamy….♥️♥️
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Thank you!
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