They’re meeting.
They’re chatting.
They’re laughing.
They’re liking.
They’re understanding.
They’re leaning.
They’re kissing.
They’re goodbye-ing.
He’s calling.
She’s answering.
He’s thanking.
She’s rejoicing.
He’s offering.
She’s agreeing.
He’s planning.
They’re scheduling.
They’re remeeting.
They’re enjoying.
They’re questioning.
They’re debating.
They’re compromising.
They’re delighting.
They’re relocating.
They’re cuddling.
They’re communicating.
They’re walking.
He’s stopping.
He’s kneeling.
She’s gasping.
He’s proposing.
She’s accepting.
They’re loving.
They’re disagreeing.
They’re arguing.
She’s yelling.
He’s withdrawing.
He’s grimacing.
She’s scowling.
They’re apologizing.
They’re forgiving.
They’re moving.
They’re building.
They’re decorating.
They’re bickering.
They’re giggling.
They’re negotiating.
She’s settling.
They’re living.
She’s talking.
He’s ignoring.
She’s pressing.
He’s freezing.
She’s trying.
He’s mocking.
She’s crying.
He’s laughing.
She’s packing.
He’s imploring.
She’s glowering.
He’s begging.
She’s finishing.
He’s pleading.
He’s realizing that
she’s leaving.
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Honestly I enjoyed reading this.I loved it
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Thank you! ♥️
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A love story nowadays. I like the story very much.
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Thank you! ☺️
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So much truth!
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It speaks so much truth. Great work! ❤
Stay safe and blessed! 🙂
-theinkwarrior
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Thank you so much!
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This is just beautiful ❤️
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Thank you!
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That’s deep… Very deep.
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Thank you! ♥️
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Never read a shorter story before! Really enjoyed reading this.
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Thanks so much!
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My pleasure, Joy!
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so creative
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That’s sweet! Thank you!
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Great poem about the struggles of relationships! Simple structure yet so profound!
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Thanks! ♥️
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Interesting Timeline but I was hoping for a happy ending
Stay well and Laugh a Lot
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Sorry to disappoint!
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Oh you didn’t disappoint No no no Sorry to insult. It was well crafted and beautiful
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No offense taken! 😀
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Amazing piece!
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Aww! That’s so sweet! Thank you!
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😊
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Your poem tells me that it was part of your experience life? I love it! Very gentle and smooth 🙂
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Thankfully, I haven’t experienced this poem’s storyline exactly. But thank you! I’m glad it sounds so realistic!
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🙂 aesthetic 🙂 yes it sounds so realistic to me 🙂
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I don’t think you missed anything. Well written. The last verse made me think of the song “Caroline” by Arlo Parks. If you haven’t heard it, its worth a listen: http://linesbyleon.com/2021/12/13/music-monday-songs-you-might-want-to-hear-4/
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What a beautiful song! Thanks so much for the recommendation!
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Your welcome. It’s one of my favorites.
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*applause*
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Thank you!!
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I’m liking.
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That changing from the third plural to the second singular pronouns really struck the nail on the head. Awesome poem!
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Thank you!
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A great read. I loved the clever way in which you penned this! 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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he and she could not be
cos they did not want the same thing
union of a snake
and in it s wake
they just shed their skin
dead and dry to the feel
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This was such a poignant gut-wrenching story. So much conveyed in so little. Beautifully written!
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Thank you!
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